20.5.10

The Long Cycle of Friendship.

Hi guys,

Thank you for following my story, ( those who are). It has been a tough week for me, and I noticed a serious lack of flow in my writing, typos... anyway, I am not very pleased with the outcome. It goes to show how mood really affects the writer. I also find it slightly difficult to write in First person and third person at the same time... voice, narrative, dialogue.. everything funny shaped! Challenges, challenges.

Anyway, rambling over. Enjoy!

for those who are just starting to follow this... kindly scroll down my page for the remaining stories.



Babatunde 4

13 comments:

Miss Natural said...

Hmm bimbylads as I neared the end of the story and realised the scroll bar wasnt going any further the first thought that came to mind was I hate you. lol sorry, dont mean to be drastic but I really do...this was really really good and I was gripped. When is the next part coming. I have my suspicions but lol I'd rather have them confirmed. Keep them coming, and quickly.

Btw are you ok? Hope all is well, family and work? Be strong, chin up girl and by God's grace you will overcome xx

Anonymous said...

Well Done. I think there is a connection btw Adunni and Babatunde. Let me not spoil the lovely story cos am loving it.....thanks!

Myne Whitman said...

Things are getting really interesting. Honestly I have to keep myself for asking for the whole thing, I am so busy, but believe that it is calling me sha. Nice one. And I like the Scribd idea, all the best dear.

Enjoy your weekend.

BiMbyLaDs** said...

@ Miss Natural: loll.. love u too boo!. Thank for the encouraging word, I am fine and dandy now. lol

@anon: spoil it o, so I can change it.. lol.. thanks for stopping by

@ Myne: U know its not that easy! lol.. thanks for stopping by and welldone on urs as well. I read but dont comment, maybe I should start doing that too.

Zena said...

Ummmm, I don't think its fair.. I read this thing without getting up.... So when do we get the second part?

No pressure, Stay well. And thank you for your comments

omobolanle said...

i'm following o! i love your writing so much, i read ALL of your previous posts and bookmarked your blog, so you better not loose inspiration :)

and please more!more! babatunde, deola, fola, k..ahh...more!

The experiences of an achiever....... said...

lol!! razz is not the new cool o Adunni!! I like Bimby..excelllent!!! Be sure to proof read though - you have hear instead of hair and some other minute errors..fantastic read all in all!

BiMbyLaDs** said...

@Omobolanle: thanks a lot, lol, because when I get like 2 comments in like 4 days, I think, maybe I should stop showing my writing on line cos its not achieving what it should,i.e reader feedback, and stick to normal blogging. But the writer in me cannot be killed, so I continue anyway!lol. thanks!

@The experiences of an achiever: I KNOOOOOOWW like a million mistakes and errors and even bad writing. lol, but I was soo not in the right frame of mind when I wrote that post. It was a first edit!

thanks all.

Jaycee said...

Please don't lose inspiration, just when I'm about to catch up on everything. I love the way you write. I'm following. Will soon post comments on each post you've done so far. *Smiles*

BiMbyLaDs** said...

Oh Jaycee, you are too kind. Colour me very humbled. Bless u and yours. Bim

DarLyn said...

Nice, nice, very good of you to leave us on a cliff. My fingers are crossed waiting for the next installment so don't you stop writing :)

I have been read this story twice now but had to come back a third time to leave my comment.

I don't know who to feel sorry for more, Fola or Adunni.

Looks like some major sturvs is about to start.

I am waiting :)

BiMbyLaDs** said...

Thank you Darlyn!

Jaycee said...

LOL @ tenk you plinzeess. My heart has been in my mouth for Adunni since the day she entered that old witch's house. Hmmmph!