29.5.10

Drooling....in deep sorrow.

Hi All,

Thanks to everyone who has read and especially those who have commented, thanks thanks. Your comments,especially your criticisms help me. Thank you. Last week Adunni was introduced to Madam's house and her amusing daughter, Princess....and she really hopes things will finally get better for her... Will they? Find out now! ( gosh, I sound soo nollywoodish)

Enjoy!

Adunni_52[1]

13 comments:

~B~ said...

omG, u dnt kno how I was on edge hopin someone wuld walk in on them! *whew*

so now wat? will Madam fire her?? nd ddn't the foolish daddy jst finish sayin he was in love with someone else??

Update!!

YankeeNaija said...

WHOA!!!!

Myne Whitman said...

Chei, that was edge of the seat! Bim!!!!!!!!!!!

So what happens next?

**small typo. swaying (swatting)

TiTi said...

Cliff hanger!!!! Cannot wait until the next one. Good job Bimbs

Anonymous said...

whoooopppteee doooo! Thanks for this Bimby. You described the encounter btw "daddy" and adunni so well, I felt disgusted...truly. Pls hurry back with the next chapter. Thanks again, ya rawk!

DarLyn said...

Can't all these bad bad people leave Adunni alone, poor girl:(

What happens now?

Anonymous said...

WHOA! I can't wait till the next one!! lol@ "Let Daddy Inspect you"...what kinda of stupid inspection is that. I am guessing that is how has been "inspecting" all the other maids...Ok lemme stop before I start making up stories.

Fabulo-la said...

Is it not time for the next chapter?
Lol
That was sth else.

Jaycee said...

OH MY GOODNESS!!!

I can't shout!!! The plot thickens right now. Excellent writing again. Why did Adunni go back to the bed and raise up her dress? Isn't she 19 years old? Surely she must have known...she should not have obeyed immediately. She should have waited to be slapped first! Hsss!

Ok, can't wait for the next installment. I'm well caught up now...I've read everything.
:)

Miss Natural said...

selfish me wishes you'd write faster lol or update more haha. but that's just selfish me *hint* lol. This was gripping, kaiiiii dun dun dun...what's next. can't wait!

Anonymous said...

Patiently waiting for the next installment...

The experiences of an achiever....... said...

Dang!! loving this Mummy Chinese eyes.....terrific GRIPPING writing!

GHANAIJA said...

Bim!! I didnt know you had updated oh!! chei which kain wahala Adunni come find herself for inside, Madam is going to kill her! hurry up and update pls...