Hmmmmph! That's all I can say right now. This chapter has been arguably the MOST gripping chapter so far. From Kayode staring at his passport after the call from Olga, to Adunni's father gripping the old woman's throat. You're an excellent writer.
A single observation: when you said KV's uncle's office was the size of a football pitch, I stopped to gasp. Was it really that big?
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About time woman. Sheez!!! It's like crack man, cannot get enough. lol. simply waiting for the next installment.
OMG!
Ok the web is getting tighter, a read worth the wait.
Now please don't make me wait, can you put up the update tomorrow
:) really captivating.
Bimby! Please biko, ejoo, don't wait two weeks abeg. This is engrossing.
I am so looking forward to the rest of this very interesting story!!!
I'm loving it...
@YN: u don come o! lol
@darlyn: soon come
@Myne: We are learning from u o
@ No limit: thankx
This was great! you must update regularly now...loved the suspense and the juxtaposition of settings! awesome!
i likey! it is really engaging from the beginning to the end. nice
Fantastic read!! more more Mummy bims!
chants...i want more! i want more!
can't wait for the rest.very wonderfully and deliciously written.thumbs up bimby for a job well done...again!
Bimby,You are too much!.i am lovin'the story already...I pray God continues to give you wisdom.
Hmmmmph! That's all I can say right now. This chapter has been arguably the MOST gripping chapter so far. From Kayode staring at his passport after the call from Olga, to Adunni's father gripping the old woman's throat. You're an excellent writer.
A single observation: when you said KV's uncle's office was the size of a football pitch, I stopped to gasp. Was it really that big?
Interesting story Bimby. I'm hooked.
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