20.6.10

Imperfect Symphony.

Hi guys,


Sorry for delay. Hope you enjoy this week's post. comments as always are welcome.  See you soon.!xx

Bim
xx



Kayode 6

18 comments:

BiMbyLaDs** said...

Oh crap. Seen mistakes already. Wo na una sabi. Enjoy it like that. eesh.

Jaycee said...

Bimbylads, honestly I don't know how else to tell you that you've got a rare talent. The first scene of the party...and the way Kayode met Adunni...GENIUS! Lol @ Adunni pronouncing KV as K-Fee.

Now the second part...Adunni's father is going to kill her oooooo...Yepa.

I really, really, really, really, really enjoyed this Bimbylads. People are going to LOVE this book when it's published. Glad to be one of the first set of eyes...oh, and maybe I was too engrossed in the story to notice any mistakes this time (and that's a good sign).

Have a blessed week :)

Anonymous said...

@ Jaycee: Thank God for his gifts on us all. You write excellently too... :-)
have a wonderful week full of God's blessings in Jesus name.
Bimbylads

The experiences of an achiever....... said...

Yes!!! Fantastic Mrs Bimby!! I really was so engrossed that the only mistake I saw was foetal (perhaps British? ours is fetal). The kind of joy that is in my heart right now for Adunni and KV is ridiculous! you would think she was real! and her pops needs to chill on all the hate..jeez.

BiMbyLaDs** said...

@ EOAA: lol.. I like the way I shortened ur name. Thanks for ur comment babe. Yeah, I think foetal is British: the word thingy kept on underlining it, each time.. so I just stuck to anyone. have a blessed week!

Maid of Heart said...

Wow, I loved it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the encounter between the two would-be love birds and the ending was good, left us hanging.

Will go back for a second read and do a sweep. Good job and thumbs up girl.

Myne Whitman said...

This story has me hooked, two levels of suspense and you keep tightening it. Well done, and I didn't catch the mistakes too.

YankeeNaija said...

D-A-Y-U-M! Whoa!!!! Gripping. Excellent.

GHANAIJA!! said...

Darling me i am loffing u more and more this book is too gen gen!! how are you? do you have bb abeg inbox me ur pin. kisses for mini bim. xoxo

Anonymous said...

..Brilliant!!!..love it!...Pls,don't let Adunni father find her in Lagos,abeg let him get killed somehow...and ermm..i know you are very busy and all,but pls don't keep us waiting for the next chapter.
God bless you plenty,Madam Bimbylads....lol

BiMbyLaDs** said...

@ Ghanaija: I not get BB o. Sorry, Facebook and msn are more than enough for me at the moment.
@ others: thank you

ibilola said...

can't find d errors o. Luv this...especially Kayode's self consciousness move (sitting on his shoes)... nice depth.

DarLyn said...

OH MY!!!
This is really good.
KV and Adunni's meeting could not have been better staged :)

Hey will somebody please tell "Daddy from the village" to take a chill pill else KV will have to deal with him :))

I'm liking this story more by the day.
Bimbylads kudos

Miss Natural said...

I didnt see any mistakes oh...maybe because i was gripped by the story. I adored this sha!! the emotion between KV and Adunni. I wonder what's the big secret KV's dad has, about KV's mum, and most of all Adunni's dad's problem. Ahh he must hate his daughter so much that he's leaving no stone unturned to find her. Now i think maybe the old woman was even trying to help her sef.

BT said...

lOVELY story line. O wa talented, yes, o wa gifted! waiting ooo.

Anonymous said...

A friend forwarded your stories, and I must say thst you have a talent..stories have been good, and keep you wanting more...just..please write something already! Thanks for what you've written so far....

Joxy said...

Bimbylads! O ga o. O wa keep wa in suspensre ba yi. Oya I'm cracking my whip, get the next chapter out now kia masa. Well done girl, very gripping.

miz-cynic said...

I RILY LOVED THIS, IT ALSO HAS THE BIMBYLADS TOUCH(FUNNY),ESPECIALLY THE K-FEE.LOVED THE DEPTH TOO,AND THE EASY WAY U WRITE.THE ENGLISH IS VERY SIMPLE AND EASY TO READ, I BET ITS A STORY A SIX-YEAR OLD CAN READ BY HERSELF EVEN THOUGH IT MIGHT NOT BE TO HER TASTE.glad i checked ur blog today.it cheered me up