Chapter Two.
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If I beat you you will write everyday!! Im hooked!! as in i was inside the ball room and in the room too but I closed my eyes...hmmm how many chapters pls?? so i can do time table:P
Z!!! I love u ...lol.. I was laughing my head off when I saw Ghana on my feedjit thing..I just knew it was u. timetable ko!! so that ur oga at work will email me bomb? lollll..
its been ages since i came to this page...off to read
ooooohhhhhhhh why now?!!!??! Wat do u mean next week??? Bims - we no likey o! Mind u're sef very strongly!
Could we get a sneak preview?pls?pretty please???
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Bimbylad if u dnt want u and I to enter the same troziz update latest tomorw!i could even stop reading!AWESOME as usual!
The plot thickens! I'm intrigued. Having read the last two chapters in just a day, I'll wait patiently till next week. Or should that be I can't wait?!
@Justjoxy why are you waiting patiently till next week!!!!!me im waiting patiently till tonight!!
@Bim Oremi atata i miss you ohh no be small thing looking forward to hard back cover oh....May Almighty God continue to increase your talent and humour XOXO
The plot thickens indeed. I assume this is the same story with the last? Hmmm...I loved this chapter, the description, the details and emotions. Really looking forward to the next.
cruel and unusual punishment. always leave us on the edge of our seats. next week it is. and no teasers about "maybe"
Totally LOVE!!!
First you draw us in, and now make us wait till next week?
This is so not fair :-(!!! How can you whet my appetite and then leave me hanging…now I'm hooked and I will have to start stalking your blog as I used to back in the days!...hmmm indeed you are back in full force! Brilliant write up….I'm overloving it!
Ghananaija love u too. was thinking about ur waxed perfect eyebrows yesterday with a smile on my face.
@Pink Satin: wassup luv, anything for blogville idol or somin this yr?
@justjoxy: howdy? lovin ur blog.
@Myne: I'm learning from u.
@ Yankee Naija: I look forward to ur comments because they actually crack me up ( and hubby).. cos I can imagine u saying what u write. lol..
@pawpawandmango: u know what, ur blog rocks!
@NoLimit: thank u!! how have u been?
thanks all.xx
lol!! Bim na wa for u and my eyebrows ....when Mini Bim wants to do eyebrows you can call her Auntie Z...pls can i get a pishore of her:(
This was so awesome. Waiting impatiently till the next chapter. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it
damn. I came, hoping for another installment. I swear, your stuff is like crack and mind you I've never done drugs before, so I can only imagine. but yeah, your stuff is like crack and it's addicting. Woman, isn't it one week yet????? I tried. I'll come back to check. and LOL at the comment you made, yeah, I write like I talk, which is a bit scary, but yeah. lol.
Bim, talents are precious gifts frm our maker....NUTURE IT!!! you are truly gifted!
BIMBY!!! U've started again o! this is a new year!!! what in d world just happened???!!!!!! pLEASE UPDATE THIS THING NOWW??????
Where do you get these things 4rm????
d'u know i still remember clearly your 1st book series? how u nearly KILLED me with waiting?! i remember i guessed d end and won the book!
i looovvveee ur work mehn.. please update!
kisses to minibimz, she has a truly talented mommy!
UPDATE!!!!!
Bimby, it's been over a week now. So where's the next chapter???
lol... see u people ordering chapter like its macdonald's burger!! okay no vex. Tommorow will be 7 days so ill post it tommorow...
thanks for stopping by...
Z..stop harrasing me jo!! lol... bully!
just reading ur blog 4 d first time.u've gt an amazing talent.patience is a virtue so YES will wait till nxt wk bt in d meantime,am running off 2 read ur older posts.u rock gurl!
The entrance of Fola and the descriptions up to the point were you said "Fola was Fola," was simply amazing. And I'm just like Deolu, immediately I get into a moving vehicle I fall asleep quickly...LOL. And then the part where Fola tells him she's pregnant, you really know how to build suspense. Babs' reaction was as if he didn't love Folu anymore, can't wait for him to reveal what's really on his mind. 10/10 on suspense (I'm feeling like a grader now...lol)
Some other minor observations:
1) You said Fola kissed both of their cheeks. Would Fola really kiss Deolu's cheek if she felt some sort of resentment toward him?
2) I think there was more "telling than showing" in the very beginning (the ballroom scene introduction). Also, the sentence "becoming one of only twenty world-wide major contractors" could do without the word "only." Or don't you think? :)
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